Thursday, October 24, 2013

Narrative Poem

Amber Rutledge
Mrs. Mckoy
Block- 1st
10-3-13
The Day I Rise

You think you are loved
But all who really loves you
Is the god above you

You would think home would be a safe place
But you always try to run away…
Like its a race…                                                                                                     Soon I will fly...

Run away from your home
When you are being hurt
Scared when you are left alone
Thinking he’s going to choke you and dangle you by your feet..                             I die….
You think why me? I don’t deserve to get hurt at all
I’m a human being.
I’m a person not a chuckie doll.                                                                                I cry…

I want to get away
I want to get help
But he threatens to beat me one day
And send me straight to hell

I cannot fight back with words or hands
Face it, it is not going to be an easy fight
Because I’m a girl, he’s a man.

Sometimes I wish I can take my own life
I suffer everyday in that home
I suffered just like Jesus Christ
But no one can hear me                                                                                        I’m all ALONE…

Ever since my mother had died, he blames me
For his mistakes
Because I came out a mixed baby, and not his race.                                            I wonder why…

There is not a day I wish I could die
Or be where my mother is up in the sky
He will beat me and torcher me till the day I die
But he will never take my Dignity or Pride

This is the day I RISE.

2 comments:

  1. Amber that was a really good poem, i think that was an extremely powerful because this really does happen all the time in every city. but yeah you did a really good job with this. something to think about would be like to explain your topic in other ways.

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  2. Thank you so much(: and alright ill have that in mind.

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